Following last Monday's discussion, I made some minor revisions to the plan. Wanted to destroy it in all honesty but was told to complete the scheme as it stands:
Apart from layout issues (going to landscape, resolving key and annotations etc.) the only design changes are the completion of pier/ boardwalk area and improving quality of shelters.
This is what I showed to Jamie today, very late, alongside my colleague Antoine:
I fucking hate it and it took me ages. I dream of the day when I can arrive for a crit on time, completely satisfied- nay, proud!- of what I have produced.
It's hard trying to decide what to include in the section-
it is, after all, an orthographic projection of an area of the site so how best to manage perspective and stuff?
I also really regret doing the plan in portrait- it means I've had to maintain the theme and do the sections in portrait, restricting the size of the section